New Edit: Zeus Zaps Like a Thunderclap (Claire Edition)

changed the format of this piece to better serve the music, art is a lot about compromise, you cannot hold on to a sentence or word bc such greed confounds the intention

anyway, here's the new edit:

start at 15 seconds and continue to 50 seconds

believe it

it is time
to unwind
"the dangling signs
from the hotel window panes

the cool frost building
on all thing quiet and still
the pills grasped
and dropping
and evaporating

believe it (fade out)

begin sample at 1:12
ends as beat studders, climax as changes

doyle plays and fades in and vocals begin as noise disortion over beat erupts

start at 2:33-34
like shuttles bursting through
the atmosphere
you move into my eyes
you show me why (end on low note, and sing direct)

in low, growl, add flange:
they
have

decorated
forest floors
doorways (sing this word)

--sing here---
into my mind
into your mind
the kind of find
you had as a boy

--back to abrupt---
wandering
all around
find
to try
this diction
and fiction
resides
in your skull
flying through your bedrooms (sing this word)

-----sing-----
with the truth of the wise
the other side of
those
rising tides

----back to abrupt----
reveal
a better way
say
its over
its never over
as my tear
rolls and
folds

then whispers (sing like the part "believe it"):

"believe it" (fades)

then let it ride